From fb7dc60637ec0ab4518e176b77adc5996e9a92b6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Foster Irwin <foster@jfirwin.com>
Date: Tue, 23 Nov 2021 12:31:34 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] initial rough draft copy

---
 website/src/pages/index.tsx | 47 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 33 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/src/pages/index.tsx b/website/src/pages/index.tsx
index a9ac69be..53e3cbdb 100644
--- a/website/src/pages/index.tsx
+++ b/website/src/pages/index.tsx
@@ -11,37 +11,56 @@ import styles from './styles.module.css';
 
 const features = [
   {
-    title: "Diverse Software Ecosystem",
+    title: "Radio Mesh Text Messaging",
     imageUrl: "img/software.svg",
     description: (
       <>
-        Having an ever-growing, vibrant software ecosystem, there's almost
-        certainly, a capable solution ready to go for your project. With
-        libraries for Typescript and Python, apps for all major platforms and a
-        whole suite of native integrations, there's something for everyone.
+        Off-grid messaging using inexpensive hardware to create your personal mesh. Radios forward messages to the next to flood the network. Communicate kilometers/miles between nodes. Internet-connected relay nodes enable the conversation to move online too.
       </>
     ),
   },
   {
-    title: "Extremely Versatile",
+    title: "Encryption",
     imageUrl: "img/versatility.svg",
     description: (
       <>
-        Create a highly scalable mesh with hardware on a multitude of platforms
-        to fit your unique requirements: Create an environment monitoring mesh
-        and produce real-time heatmaps, or maybe decentralised, encrypted
-        messaging network, your imagination is the limit.
+        Messages are AES256 encrypted. Only radios supplied with your channel settings (which includes the key) should be able to read your messages. Using multichannel settings you can send encrypted messages on one channel and still participate in a default Meshtastic mesh.
       </>
     ),
   },
   {
-    title: "Peak Efficiency",
+    title: "Conserve Battery",
     imageUrl: "img/efficiency.svg",
     description: (
       <>
-        Go for days on end and on a single battery, or extend it infinitely with
-        a solar cell, communicate with tens kilometres between nodes on
-        inexpensive beginner friendly hardware.
+        Go for days on end and on a single battery or extend it infinitely with a solar cell. Power management ensures the device will last the duration of your use.
+      </>
+    ),
+  },
+  {
+    title: "Extendable",
+    imageUrl: "img/efficiency.svg",
+    description: (
+      <>
+        Create a highly scalable mesh with hardware on a multitude of platforms to fit your unique requirements: Create an environment monitoring mesh and produce real-time heatmaps, or maybe decentralised, encrypted messaging network, your imagination is the limit.
+      </>
+    ),
+  },
+  {
+    title: "Platform Agnostic",
+    imageUrl: "img/efficiency.svg",
+    description: (
+      <>
+        Meshtastic clients are built or being built for all major desktop and mobile platforms. Linux, Windows, Mac, Android, and iOS are all supported or well on their way to being supported.
+      </>
+    ),
+  },
+  {
+    title: "Open Source",
+    imageUrl: "img/efficiency.svg",
+    description: (
+      <>
+        All Meshtastic software is open source. If you want an improvement, submit a pull request or file an issue on Github. Happy coding!
       </>
     ),
   },